Tonight’s Edition of “Things I Said While Revising”
Jaye is awake and home this time, but not in the room, so once again I’m talking to myself. “Okay, let’s try that again.” “Argh!” “Ugh.” “E . . . gak!” (So flustered with a sentence I couldn’t manage words.) “Yeah! There we go!” “Oh! Even better!” “What the . . .?” “What?” “C’mon.” “Jesus […]
Today In “Things Said To Myself While Revising”
Jaye is home. But she’s asleep, so I’m still talking to myself.: “The ego, Bobby!” “Whoa, that’s a bad sentence.” “Ohhhhh!” “Dumbass.” (And for once this was directed at myself instead of Bobby.) “Oh, god, that’s . . .” “Groovy.” “What the fuck?” “Ooooh . . . that’s better . . . yeah!” “Jesus fucking Christ!” (This was […]