Who is your audience?
Today I decided to lurk in a writing group I used to regularly post in. I quit posting there because I seriously didn’t fit in. First of all, it was one of those places where everyone lauds each other for being “so brave” to have published anything in the first place before giving criticisms that feel apologetic for having found anything to criticize. Really, it was like having your book critiqued by Magrat from the Discworld books, whereas I’d prefer a more Granny Weatherwax approach. Also, I have issues with the whole “it’s so brave just to put your work out there!” meme, but I can’t articulate those right now. But that wasn’t my main problem with the group. My main problem was that they were all so caught up in the structure. They were all worried about things like “I introduce my main character on page two instead of right off, is that okay?” and “I don’t hit the first major turning point of my story until three-quarters of the way through the first book, is that okay?” and other stuff like that that I’ve never known a reader, as opposed to another author who is also steeped in the thou-shalls and thou-shall-nots of modern writing culture, to ever notice.
Today on this group I saw something that really made me stop and wonder who the fuck people are writing for any more. It was an article about not using “filter words”. These area words like “realized” and “felt” that “distance your reader from your viewpoint character.” It was, really, just a different way of putting that blasted “show, don’t tell!” misunderstanding that it’s always better to have a character’s actions reflect things than to just say them.
Here’s the thing: As a reader, if I feel distant from the character, it’s not because of the author’s word choice. It’s because the character never felt real. As a reader, if a book doesn’t hit a major turning point until three-quarters of the way through, I only care if the reason it didn’t was that the story had way too much mundane detail (which is so fucking common a thing right now because of that blasted “show, don’t tell” misunderstanding). As a reader . . . Anne of Green Gables is one of my most favorite books ever. Anne isn’t introduced until the second chapter. By today’s writing “rules”, especially those hewn to like law by self-published and as yet unpublished authors hoping to find the magic formula for success, that alone makes it a horrible book.
I don’t obey all of those “rules”. In No More Lies, there are times when I use ~gasp~ adverbs after “said” rather than show Bobby’s actions. Why? Because there are times when that’s the right thing to do. Because I’m writing for people who want to read a book about a ninja/spy/assassin who has Wisdom as his dump stat trying to adapt to normal life, not for other authors, or professional reviewers, or anyone else who’s primary interest isn’t in the story, but is in the technical crafting of it. Because it doesn’t matter how technically perfect a story is if the narrative sucks, if the characters are uninteresting, if, in short, the story is bad. Remember, writing is as much, if not more, an art than a craft. There is no magic formula. The rules were made by other authors, and you shouldn’t be writing just for them.
(Forgive disjointedness in this, please. One of my shift keys is not working quite right and it was very distracting.)
Screw it
The regular Progress Report post scheduled for this week might appear later today, or it might appear next week, or I might just skip it. I just spent twenty minutes writing it only for it to not only fail to post, but fail to have autosaved as I typed it like it’s supposed to. So I’d have to totally start over. As it’s mostly a post for me, I don’t feel like redoing it all right now. If you were, for some weird reason, totally looking forward to it, sorry.
Five Star Reviews — Love or Lust by Jaye Edgecliff
This book is not the sort I’d ordinarily be interested in at all. In fact, I first read the rough draft only out of a sense of obligation . . . the author is my best friend, so I have to read her stuff, right?
I loved it.
It’s a teen romance that managed to draw me in and keep me interested. Teen romance usually ranks somewhere around Neonazi propaganda in my opinion. So me liking this novel is not far short of a miracle.
The description, via Goodreads:
The first installment of Now & Forever.
It’s a week before her freshman year when Lauren Conners is thinking, for what feels like the billionth time, of breaking up with her boyfriend of the past couple of years. In a seeming answer to her fervent prayers for guidance she looks up into the hypnotic eyes of the quiet little Washington town’s exotic, dark, and alluring new addition.
The two fall immediately for one another when their eyes meet. But Lauren can’t be sure – is this love at first sight? An answer from God to her prayer for guidance? Or is this simply lust as she wrestles with newborn passions and desires for the beautiful creature that has entered her life?
The relationship is fraught with other issues on top of the poor young ballerina’s internal and spiritual uncertainty: the two attend the best school in the area, a private school, Immaculate Conception, a Catholic school Lauren has attended since she was in sixth grade and where she has a reputation as a pious, studious, bright, Good Girl. So … what’s the problem here? Oh, her newfound love (or is it lust?) is a girl.
My review:
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I’ve since read book two and given it five stars as well. It wasn’t as good as the first one — it probably was more of a 4.5 — but it was still really good.
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The author is not your bitch
The fans are all upset. They’re always going to be upset. Why did he do it like this? And why didn’t he do it like this? They write their own movie, and then, if you don’t do their movie, they get upset about it.
- George Lucas On Indiana Jones and the Kingdom of the Crystal Skull, VanityFair.com “Keys to the Kingdom”
This quote was very much on my mind today as I read reviews and comments on the newest issue of GI Joe: A Real American Hero. You see, a major character was just killed off. Fans have known for months he was going to be killed off because in one of the dumbest marketing moves ever the arc is titled “The Death of Snake Eyes.” (Sorry if that’s a spoiler for anyone, but I assume the overlap in my readership and Real American Hero fans is myself. It’s not exactly a popular comic.) Fans have, of course, been speculating about how he was going to die.
No one got it right. (Personally, I thought how he did die was a lot more fucking awesome than any of the fan theories anyway.)
So, naturally, the author is a horrible, horrible person who should’ve listened to his fans. I mean, that’s just logic, right?
No, actually. It’s not. There’s this nice little quote from Neil Gaiman that floats around fandom that’s applicable here, even if the context was different in his original post, “George R. R. Martin is not your bitch.” (And here is his post set to music: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V6a1y1pc-GQ, found while trying to make sure I had the quote right.) For Martin, replace any creator.
You see, when you buy a comic or a book or a movie or whatever, you’re not purchasing part of the creator’s soul. You’re just buying a product they made. You have no right to tell them what they have to do next. I have very definite ideas about what I’d do right now if I was the author of Real American Hero, but I’m not; Larry Hama is, so what he wants is what happens. I suppose I could start a fan campaign to convince IDW to tell him to write what I want, but what’s the point in that? That just makes me an entitled bitch. If I don’t like what he writes, that’s what fanfic is for. If I really don’t like it, then I’ll quit reading.
Because, you see, at the end of the day, it’s not all about you. Most creative people who are really good at what they do are creating first for themselves. Yeah, some of them can jump through hoops to write what will sell best and still come out with something good. Most of us can’t though. I could write a teen dystopian sci-fi, I have no doubt. And, yeah, it’d sell more than this unholy combination of a romance, action-adventure, and coming-of-age story that I’m revising right now. But those sales wouldn’t be as long lasting, because the story wouldn’t be as good. It’d sell now, while it’s trendy, and that’s it.
Remember when every fucking book in the YA section was a Harry Potter knockoff? How many of those are still in print? See my point?
Now, I’m not saying you can’t bitch about it when an author takes a work in what you consider the wrong direction. I’m, as I said, less than thrilled with some of Hama’s creative decisions of late. I have voiced these opinions on IDW’s forums. But I was just venting to my fellow fans, not trying to dictate what he should do next to fix it. Also, as I said, I have opinions about what would happen next if I was writing it. Obviously I’d like it if these events happened, but if they don’t, oh well. The author is not obligated to do what I want.
“But what about the author’s contract with the reader?” you ask? What about it? The contract is simple: You exchange money, you get story. You have no more guarantee than that. Quality is not assured. Oh, sure, you can have general expectations that should be met . . . if it says military sci-fi on the spine there should be some military stuff in there, if it says romance there better be a love story, things like that. But even those aren’t the author’s fault if they’re not there, generally. Usually it’s because someone in marketing did something stupid. Or, in the case of indie publishers, the website switched your story to another genre for no fucking reason (I know someone who’s children’s stories were suddenly listed as erotica on Kobo!) So, really, it is a simple as “Pay for product, get product.”
It’s not “Pay for product, get say in next product”, nor “Pay for product, get say in when next product is coming out”, nor “Pay for product, dictate changes to product.” Nope, it’s “pay for product, get product”, same as with everything else. If you buy a dish at a restaurant, you don’t get to tell the chef what else to cook. If you buy a computer, you don’t get to tell the manufacturer what features to put in the next model. Why do people treat books and the like differently?
New chapter of my serial up
http://intertwined-lives.universal-nexus.com/chapter-eight-rusark/
Progress Report
Instead of listing all my works-in-progress and getting depressed by how many I haven’t worked on in ages, this year I am instead updating how far I’ve come on the to do list I posted at the beginning of the year . . . with new items being added because I’m great at making plans, but suck at sticking to them . . . and with changes made because of the same reason. Asterisks mark things added or changed before this update, but after the initial list.
April started out excellently on the editing side, with me nearly hitting my target goal for the month in the first week; the writing side started rather well too, if not as amazingly so. Alas, anxiety over stupid shit got the better of me and I lost a week to it. I’m pretty sure I’ll make my editing goal again this month, but not so sure about the writing one.
- Edit my wife’s story she wants to submit to Queers Destroy Science Fiction, if she decides she wants to expand it. DONE
- Submit it for her. DONE, REJECTED
- Finish editing my own story for Queers Destroy Science Fiction. DONE
- Submit it. DONE, REJECTED
- *Edit Jake thingy inspired by annoying bit in book I was reading. DONE
- *Submit it to Queers Destroy Science Fiction too, since it’s flash fiction instead of a short story. DONE, REJECTED
- *Alternate between writing Forbidden Love Version 2, Intertwined Lives, Dangers of the Past, and editing No More Lies and Intertwined Lives, not becoming slavishly devoted to any one work, but keeping in mind and tracking my monthly word count goals. UPDATE: So far this month all of my writing has been on Dangers of the Past, but I have gotten some of both No More Lies and Intertwined Lives edited.
- *Maintain schedule of editing and posting a chapter of Intertwined Lives every other Tuesday. DOING SO FAR
- *Once have enough word count/regular installments to do so, submit Intertwined Lives to webfictionguide.com. DONE, APPROVED.
- *Submit Intertwined Lives to Muse’s Success. DONE, APPROVED
- *Remember to use the #TuesdaySerial hashtag on twitter when announcing each week’s chapter. DOING SO FAR
- *Submit Jake thingy to Clarkesworld. DONE, REJECTED
- *Submit wife’s story to Strange Horizons. DONE, REJECTED
- *Submit own story to Strange Horizons. DONE, REJECTED
- *Submit “The Traitor” (formerly known as “Jake thingy”) to Daily Science Fiction DONE, REJECTED
- *If Strange Horizons rejects my story, submit it to Asimov’s. WAITING, CONSIDERING NOT DOING.
- *Edit wife’s fantasy story. DONE
- *Submit wife’s fantasy story to that anthology. DECIDED AGAINST AS WAS OVER TWICE THE PREFERRED WORD COUNT
- Publish No More Lies.
- Devote a month to marketing it. Just a month. No more. After that, it’ll sink or swim on its own.
- *Alternate between writing Forbidden Love Version 2, Intertwined Lives, Dangers of the Past, and editing the leytgeleshi short story collection, with the same caveats as above.
- Write remaining leytgeleshi stories.
- *Alternate between writhing Forbidden Love Version 2, Intertwined Lives, Dangers of the Past, and editing the Dagger short story collection, with the same caveats as above.
- Write remaining Dagger stories.
- Edit remaining leytgeleshi stories.
- Publish leytgeleshi story collection.
- Devote a week to marketing it. It’s going to be a free short story collection (or 99 cents, I can’t recall what we agreed on now.) There’s no sense in devoting a lot of time to marketing it.
- Edit remaining Dagger stories.
- Publish Dagger story collection.
- Devote a week to marketing it. See above for why only a week.
- *Alternate writing Forbidden Love Version 2, Intertwined Lives, and Dangers of the Past.
- *Edit Forbidden Love Version 2
- *Publish Forbidden Love Version 2
- *Devote a week to marketing it. It’s probably not going to be very long or very serious, so there’s no sense in putting much time or effort into selling it. I’m writing it mostly for my own amusement, after all.
- *Edit Dangers of the Past
- *Publish Dangers of the Past.
- *Devote a month to marketing it.
- *Write rpg book. HAVEN’T DONE ANYTHING MORE THAN DISCUSS A COUPLE OF THINGS LATELY.
Word count for April so far:
Written: 3546/10000
Edited: 7106/10000
Five star reviews — Oath of the Brotherhood
I won this book in a Goodreads First Reads Giveaway. I didn’t realize when I won it that it was Christian fantasy. When I found out it was, I was pretty sure I wouldn’t like it . . . most Christian fiction I’ve read has been preachy enough that I would’ve found it annoying even if I shared the beliefs it espoused. I needn’t have worried.
The description, via Goodreads:
In a kingdom where the Old Ways hold fast and a man’s worth lies entirely in his skill with the sword, Conor Mac Nir is a scholar, a musician, and a follower of the forbidden Balian faith: problematic for any man, but disastrous for the son of the king.When Conor is sent as a hostage to a neighboring kingdom, he never expects to fall in love with the rival king’s sister, Aine. Nor does he suspect his gift with the harp (and Aine’s ability to heal) touches on the realm of magic. Then his clan begins a campaign to eliminate all Balians from the isle of Seare, putting his newfound home in peril and entangling him in a plot for control of the island that has been unfolding since long before his birth.Only by committing himself to an ancient warrior brotherhood can Conor discover the part he’s meant to play in Seare’s future. But is he willing to sacrifice everything–even the woman he loves–to follow the path his God has laid before him?
My review:
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It didn’t stay the best book I read last year. That honor goes to The Name of the Wind, which I’ll be posting my review of around the end of July if all goes according to schedule. But it was still a very, very good book and I’m still planning to get and read the sequel.
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And, as usual, sorry this is a day late.
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Diversity in SF
For those of you reading this who may not know it, there’s been a big deal made in the past few years over diversity in science fiction and fantasy, both in the authors and in the characters.
It confuses the fuck out of me that this needs to be an issue. SF is about possibilities, it’s about “what if”s. It should be the easiest place for people who aren’t cis-gendered straight white men to find people like themselves, seems to me . . . because in any future or fantasy world I’d want to spend any time in, the prejudices society has today wouldn’t exist.
SF is written by and for geeks. We’ve spent our whole lives, those of us who were geeks before being a geek was cool, being teased and mocked for our interests . . . or at least being made to feel awkward. (I remember a teacher once seeing the Star Trek novel in my hand and saying, “You like stuff like that?” in a tone I’d reserve for someone reading something by Ann Coulter. A teacher. You’d think they’d just be happy to see someone reading.) Yet there are those among us who don’t think women belong, who don’t think people of color belong, who don’t think anyone who’s not heterosexual belongs. I just don’t fucking get it.
And then there are those who think those of us who aren’t cis straight white men do belong . . . provided we stay in our own little niche. Women can write sci-fi romance, but by God they shouldn’t write regular sci-fi. I’ve actually seen the claim, in reviews, that “women just don’t understand science the way men do.” And that women can’t write fight scenes or military sci-fi and . . . well, basically that women should stick to writing romance and cozy mysteries. Yes, this is still the twenty-first century, you haven’t somehow landed in an alternate 1950s where they already have the internet.
I’ve been lucky, so far. As far as I know none of my negative reviews have been because of my gender, sexuality, religion, etc. The closest thing to prejudice I’ve encountered is a reviewer or two who had narrow-minded views of what constituted science fiction. (Here’s my feelings on that: spaceships and robots = science fiction, even if there are pirates and swords and a section inspired by the many dungeon crawls I’ve run) And yet time and again I find myself wondering if my sales, especially given that two of my three published works sort of quality as military sf, would be better if my first name wasn’t normally a female name. I also wonder if they’d be even worse if my name wasn’t also, if far less commonly, a male name. I hate this. I hate that I even have to think about this. This is the twenty-first fucking century. And there are still people who don’t want to read a book because the author uses a different bathroom than they do.
I know I’m lucky that I’m just a bi, pagan, woman. It could be worse. I could be non-white or disabled. Then even less people would want to read my stuff. I just cannot fucking understand this!
And then there’s the matter of characters . . . it’s entirely possible that some people don’t want to read my books because I’m so very casual about, say, Lyndsey having both a husband and a wife. This, according to some people, is the author forcing an agenda on them instead of just entertaining them. Personally, I see more of an agenda when everybody in a work is straight and monogamous, even the aliens. (Or elves or whatever, if that’s more your cup of tea.) If I ever made it clear in something besides this blog post that Lyndsey’s wife is a different race than her, my gods, I’m clearly just trying to appeal to the politically correct/social justice warrior crowd or, worse, am part of that crowd! I mean, it couldn’t possibly be that I think a culture that’s been around since we here on Earth were still figuring out whether or not fire should be nasally fitted has long since gotten over worrying about things like skin tone and what people do with their genitals. Or, you know, that I don’t personally think those are a big fucking deal so am not going to make them one in my fiction. Which I guess that does make me part of that crowd, to a certain extent. But trust me, I’m not writing to promote an agenda. If I was, I’d choose someone other than Lyndsey to represent bisexuals. The buxom blonde who fucks anything that moves is not exactly who you’d want to use in a work that was trying to make a serious point about bisexuals.
My characters have the traits they do because they have the traits they do. If I’m trying to make any point at all, if I’m trying to promote any agenda at all, it’s this very simple one: It shouldn’t matter what your sexuality, religion, skin color, gender identity, etc. are. If this makes me part of some cabal of social justice warriors out to ruin science fiction and fantasy forever, oh well. It needs ruining if it’s not a place where that’s true.
Now, a video that I dearly love, even though I’m sad this song had cause to be made:
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Progress Report
Instead of listing all my works-in-progress and getting depressed by how many I haven’t worked on in ages, this year I am instead updating how far I’ve come on the to do list I posted at the beginning of the year . . . with new items being added because I’m great at making plans, but suck at sticking to them. And changes made because of the same reason. Asterisks mark things added before this update, but after the initial list.
March is going excellently on the editing front, unfortunately most of the word count has been a short story of my wife’s instead of No More Lies. On the writing front, well, I seem to be on target to hit my minimum goal for the first time this year, at least.
- Edit my wife’s story she wants to submit to Queers Destroy Science Fiction, if she decides she wants to expand it. DONE
- Submit it for her. DONE, REJECTED
- Finish editing my own story for Queers Destroy Science Fiction. DONE
- Submit it. DONE, REJECTED
- *Edit Jake thingy inspired by annoying bit in book I was reading. DONE
- *Submit it to Queers Destroy Science Fiction too, since it’s flash fiction instead of a short story. DONE, REJECTED
- CHANGED ITEM: Alternate between writing Forbidden Love Version 2, Intertwined Lives, Dangers of the Past, and editing No More Lies, not becoming slavishly devoted to any one work, but keeping in mind and tracking my monthly word count goals. UPDATE: Well, I was write last time that I wanted to write fantasy, but wrong about which one. Instead of working on Magi, I’ve rewritten a bit of a story I wrote in high school, this time deliberately making the protagonist a spoiled brat, which changes the story for the better and turns her into more of a Sansa Stark-like character than a Mary Sue. Dangers of the Past was formerly known as Bobby’s Daughter. It’s the sort-of sequel to “Once A Hero, Always A Hero” and No More Lies. I finally figured out how to fix a bit I was stuck at and now it’s going very smoothly.
- CHANGED ITEM: Maintain schedule of editing and posting a chapter of Intertwined Lives every other Tuesday. DOING SO FAR
- *Once have enough word count/regular installments to do so, submit Intertwined Lives to webfictionguide.com. DONE, APPROVED.
- *Submit Intertwined Lives to Muse’s Success. DONE, APPROVED
- *Remember to use the #TuesdaySerial hashtag on twitter when announcing each week’s chapter. TRIED LAST WEEK, SITE DIDN’T WORK PROPERLY
- *Submit Jake thingy to Clarkesworld. DONE, REJECTED
- *Submit wife’s story to Strange Horizons. DONE, AWAITING RESPONSE
- *Submit own story to Strange Horizons. DONE, AWAITING RESPONSE
- *Submit “The Traitor” (formerly known as “Jake thingy”) to Daily Science Fiction DONE, AWAITING RESPONSE
- *If Strange Horizons rejects my story, submit it to Asimov’s.
- NEW ITEM: Edit wife’s fantasy story. DOING SO.
- NEW ITEM: Submit wife’s fantasy story to that anthology.
- Publish No More Lies.
- Devote a month to marketing it. Just a month. No more. After that, it’ll sink or swim on its own.
- CHANGED ITEM: Alternate between writing Forbidden Love Version 2, Intertwined Lives, Dangers of the Past, and editing the leytgeleshi short story collection, with the same caveats as above. SEE ABOVE FOR WHY/HOW CHANGED
- Write remaining leytgeleshi stories.
- CHANGED ITEM: Alternate between writhing Forbidden Love Version 2, Intertwined Lives, Dangers of the Past, and editing the Dagger short story collection, with the same caveats as above. SEE ABOVE FOR WHY/HOW CHANGED
- Write remaining Dagger stories.
- Edit remaining leytgeleshi stories.
- Publish leytgeleshi story collection.
- Devote a week to marketing it. It’s going to be a free short story collection (or 99 cents, I can’t recall what we agreed on now.) There’s no sense in devoting a lot of time to marketing it.
- Edit remaining Dagger stories.
- Publish Dagger story collection.
- Devote a week to marketing it. See above for why only a week.
- CHANGED ITEM: Alternate writing Forbidden Love Version 2, Intertwined Lives, and Dangers of the Past. SEE ABOVE FOR WHY/HOW CHANGED
- NEW ITEM: Edit Forbidden Love Version 2
- NEW ITEM: Publish Forbidden Love Version 2
- NEW ITEM: Devote a week to marketing it. It’s probably not going to be very long or very serious, so there’s no sense in putting much time or effort into selling it. I’m writing it mostly for my own amusement, after all.
- NEW ITEM: Edit Dangers of the Past
- NEW ITEM: Publish Dangers of the Past.
- NEW ITEM: Devote a month to marketing it.
- *Write rpg book. HAVEN’T BEEN WORKING ON IT OR EVEN THINKING ABOUT IT MUCH LATELY.
Word count for March so far:
Written: 8581/10000
Edited: 13992/10000 (and I still have a few thousand words of my wife’s story to edit before the end of March!)